I added the “missing” scene in Broken.
I moved the scene that was wrong but need to figure out if (a) Nathan just isn’t home or (b) it’s still in the wrong place or (c) I can write Nathan into the scene somehow. I’m leaning toward (a). I’m kind of having fun with (a).
I have a busy weekend ahead so not sure I’ll have time to really read this through and see if I like the changes I made or will end up reverting back to an older draft.
Hope you all are doing well. Stay safe. Love you all.