I picked up Broken again today and read through it. Fixed some unfinished sentences. I should do the whole read it aloud, and then change fonts and read it again thing, but right now I’m still trying to figure out what the ending needs, because it needs something more.
But I’m awful at endings. They are the hardest thing about writing for me. That, and titles.
I am really glad that I included Vik in the cast of characters, though. He definitely adds to the story, in my opinion anyway. Hopefully others will agree.
So Vik is in four separate scenes. I think the ending needs him, and also something more about why they don’t address the Gula situation. I know why, but can I write it and keep it interesting? I dunno. Maybe. I should at least try.
Anyway, hope everyone is doing well and enjoying the weekend. Peace and love to you all. ❤️